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    said the pilot

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    Meanwhile in Russia, the drug mafia was planning a way to assassinate Earl, who was an elite agent for the U.S government.

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    Back to the story - Earl gets suspicious with the kids; he glances swiftly at the side view mirror to check what the boy is up-to. He is shocked by the sight that greets his eyes and he jams on the trucks brakes all off a sudden. Char who was busy admiring the nitro boost gets startled and is thrown towards the wind shield thus provoking a string of curse words from her young lips.

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    Charlotte fell short of the windshield preventing her from flying through it, but Cole was slammed up against it causing it to crack and had a small smear of blood that came from him smashing his face against the window. "OWWW! What the heck is your problem?" said Cole. "What the heck are you doing messing with that cabinet behind your seat?!" said Earl angrier than ever before. "I was just curious is all. What's the big deal?" "Well don't mess with it! Also put your seat belt on before you fly through the window for real next time. Here." said Earl as he handed him some paper towels.
    Last edited by Thunder42; 05-21-2015 at 03:44 AM. Reason: Messed up my spelling.

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    Earl puts the truck back into drive, and picks up speed. Everything is going smooth, Cole is wiping the blood off his face and pulls a small piece of glass out of his cheek, whilst Char is laying back in the cabin bed messing about with little objects on the table to her left. "Do you guys feel that?" Asks Cole. The truck has begun to vibrate, and it is slowly getting worse. "Yeah what is that?" Replies Char. Earls eyes widen, he slams on his breaks once again flinging Cole toward the windshield, but this time he had his seat belt on. The truck is sliding on the road, and the kids join Earl in his wide eyed gaze as a massive crack opens in the road in front of them. The crack is at least 50 meters wide. Smoke, colorful lights, and a powerful rumbling sound emit from the crack as the truck finally comes to a stop. Everyone hops out of the truck.
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    "What's that Earl?" asked Charlotte stepping closer and closer to the crack. "Be careful, we don't know what that is or if it's gonna break off even more than it already has." Earl replied seeming almost as lost as the two teenagers. As Earl turned and went to return to his truck to retrieve his phone and call some sort of law enforcement in the local area the rumbling began to resume. They all stumbled backwards falling down on their butts or catching themselves before they hit the ground. About that time they seen a hand grab onto the side and attempt to pull himself up. "H-hey we need to help that man! He may have fallen in when the crack opened up and took him in!" They all got up quickly and ran over to help the man up before the crack closed up.

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    They struggle to pull the man up, but they manage to get his chest up to the edge. Suddenly the rock breaks, and the man falls back down pulling on Cole. The rest of them lose their grip, and Cole begins to fall. Char reaches for Cole, grabs him, and then gets pulled in with him. Cole and Char are falling into the abyss, and Earl looks down at them screaming for them. The rocks break more, and he too, falls into the crevice. They fall for several minutes, the bright colorful lights and rumbling noise get brighter and louder, until everything goes white. Then they all wake up on a cobble road. People are riding horses, and riding in horse drawn carriages. Earl opens his eyes and looks up towards the sky where a old man is beaming over him with a bottle of whiskey in his hand. "You okay son?" He says, "What the hell are you wearing?"

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    "Me? I'm wearing overalls. What are you wearing?" countering the man with the similar question he had asked. "Well me I'm wearing the latest fashion if you don't know kid." the unnamed man said sounding kinda proud. "Where are we?" Charlotte asked looking around puzzled at this new landscape. "Well we're just five miles out of New York. How didn't you know that?" the man said looking more suspicious the more he talked with these strange people. Earl spoke up and said, "What year are we in specifically?" "Well we're in the year 1897 if you didn't know. You must have had a crazy party on something in the next town." the man said laughing and starting to walk off. "Hey mister wait up! We need a ride!" Cole said running catching up to the man.

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    The colorful lights begin to flash again, and the rumbling noise gets to loud and high pitch to bare. Cole, Char, and Earl's ears begin to bleed, followed by their eyes and nose. They begin floating up into the air, raising to the heavens incredibly fast. The light gets brighter and brighter, and the noise, louder and louder. Everything goes white. They wake up in a free fall, they are falling to the ground. They all start screaming, Char tears up and grabs Cole's hand. Earl closes his eyes and accepts his fate. When he opens them next, all three of them are floating about 3 feet above the ground in a luscious green forest. Then they drop. Earl grunts as he hits the ground, and Char lets out a high pitched screech. A man on horse back rides past and stops. He hops off, and draws an arrow from the quiver on his back and aims the bow at them. The bright light flashes again, but nothing happens to them. They look up to the sky to get their bearings, and see the semi truck falling out of the sky. The man with the bow looks up, "What the fuck?".
    Last edited by TheNerdyPanda; 05-21-2015 at 03:35 PM. Reason: Making sense of bleeding things.

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    The archer ran out of the way as the truck came crashing down near them, smashing it to pieces. "What the hell, who are you people?" the archer asked, drawing his arrow again

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